Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Blog Fourteen - Final Short Story


Danielle Zingalis

 

Short Essay One – Final Revision

 

 

Grandpa

 

            The drive from our house to theirs was so long. At the young age of only three or four, a forty-five minute drive is a lifetime. Chrissy, my twin sister, and I couldn't wait to see the familiar white duplex house with the big bay window. We were getting closer, so close. We were finally off the bridge and passing the cramped streets with condensed building. We had finally made it down their street and after my father had skillfully parallel parked the car, my mom said we could get out of the car. Our seatbelts couldn’t come off fast enough.

Chrissy and I used to run to him as soon as we got through the front door. We would run through the cold, white hallway and into the living room. As soon as my foot touched the outdated, but still so soft brown rug, it would creak and I would lean my hand on the velvet wallpaper as I continued to run. That’s what we always did when we went there. We ran to him, we couldn’t wait to see him and we were getting closer.

She would sit in the kitchen, at the head of the table with her cane in one hand and a cigarette in the other. We would run into the kitchen and the creaking would suddenly stop, we were no longer on the carpet, but the old tile. We were getting closer. Chrissy and I would look at her and smile and continue to run, we would say hi to her later, we wanted to see him first. We always wanted to see him first. There was something indescribable about him, something that we loved so much and we would just run when he was around.  

We’re so close to him. Just one more room. Running through the kitchen and past the little hallway, we made it. The walls were covered in wooden paneling and the carpet was green. He was there already standing up from the gray couch with bits of reds and yellows woven through. Chrissy and I would run into him and hug him so tightly. He took our hands and brought us to the couch and had us look behind one of the throw pillows and behind it was a little handheld videogame. He didn’t have to do that. We never expected anything when we went to see him, we just wanted to see him. Chrissy and I would get so excited to see him and he was always just as excited to see us.

 

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