Revising Draft One
After having the meeting with Dr. Chandler and my group during class, I was given really good insights about what to do next in my Long Story. I plan on discussing more about the "now" instead of just keeping the focus mostly in the past. I also want to try and add more dialogue to the story to help the story flow more.
Even though I was given great advice about the story and what to do next, I am not too sure if this is the story I plan on revising for my final draft.
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